Topic: What do you want to be in the future? Describe your dream job.
I want future is astronaut astronaut is out the would a look at Koren, Japan, USA, and everything. I'm dream job is astronaut. astronaut must is very try but very fun I'm think It's very great I'm would do every day a go to school from monday to saturday. Sunday is go to church but I'm would do every day is eat.
There are a lot of punctuation errors-lack of punctuation. There are also places where sentences need to start with a capital letter. There are sentences that I don't understand. This is the hardest essay to correct!
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